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With some reluctance I opened the tome,
that I’d excitedly glanced at as I’d driven home.
Finally here, the last part of the tale
that had begun with a book entitled Betrayal.
It told of the young love of Alyssa and Tor
that soon had you yelling and screaming for more.
The hours they flew by, the pages as well
the magical Fiona had me under her spell.
I’ll fix her I cried out , Revenge is at hand
I’ll not read so fast, I was making a stand.
Two books now finished, my Destiny here
as I turn the first page I did so with fear.
This is the third book, this is the last
come on Fiona, you’d better write fast.
For what will I do once this story is done
I’ll have to slum it a bit until the next one.

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Bravo! A poet in our midst. Clever stuff. Looking forward to hearing the wash up though. Perhaps you could put that into poetry as well?

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*Begins to Clap*

Very nice Oblex, do you come with a dance too "> ">

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Wow!

Very good, Obelixx.

*applauds*

Take a bow.

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"the universe we observe has precisely the properties we should expect if there is, at bottom, no design, no purpose, no evil and no good, nothing but blind, pitiless indifference - Richard Dawkins
Asteroid B-612

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Thank you everyone........see what Fiona does to people.....

I met her Friday night and suddenly I am writing poetry.....

"This is a dangerous lady!!!!!!"



*Be vewy vewy Qwiet........I am hunting wabbits!!!!!*

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Brilliant Obelixx, perfectly put ">