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Sorry to darken the board like this everyone, but on the weekend I found out that someone I used to know passed away after being in a car crash. ..Shortly after which I wrote a poem just to try to get my feelings out and to honour her. So I would like to share it with you. If you think its not appropriate to have on the board then I'll delete it off.
(Name of road has been replaced with **** and Name replaced with ~~~~)
R.I.P sweet child
Innocence exsists within her,
Beauty shows no doubt,
One night changes all,
I hear her terrified shout.
I can see the pictures in my head,
They play often through my mind,
I wasn't there yet I didn't have to be,
These pictures my imagination just finds.
The peaceful drive,
Along the **** road,
All in all,
Life seems so gold.
But horror ouccurs,
I see no reason why,
But tonight of nights,
Her soul did fly.
The screaming would of been dark and mad,
As the car went out of control,
Then the sudden impact,
Bodies flown around like dolls.
How young she was,
No more then a few above me,
But her spirit has soared,
And now she is free.
Be with God dear ~~~~,
I send my tears to thee,
I'll never forget that night,
I was told your car hit that tree.
Rest In Peace 23rd March 2003Cheers all

(smile faces seem a little out of place I know), thanks for letting me share.
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My condolences, Mystery Chick.
This is a lovely poem, bought a tear to my eye.
Best wishes to you.
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The peom is beautiful.. and I am sorry to hear of your sadness!
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My sympathies, Mystery Chick.
The poem was very moving and sad...i'm feeling tearful.
The greatest gift comes from the heart...
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"> thank you for your kind words