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#1 - 18th Jul 2002 16:07:00

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Brad

I would like to take this opportunity to thank you for all the help you have given me with my chapter one.

For all of you who don't know (i'm sure you do!), Brad is pretty proficient when it comes to writing... and he has given me some advice on the chapter i posted here and let me tell you it has been wonderful... the new chapter is much better..

(Lisa, snowy etc all helped) ...

My advice, if you want to improve your writing listen to Brad the Bard....

Once again mate.... Thank You.

Cheers Steve

#2 - 18th Jul 2002 23:44:00

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Certainly, Steve. Glad to help.

It really does help your own writing to critique (both in terms of learning from what others do well and learning to identify problems that may show up in your own writing), so I'm always interested to see what other people write.

You've got a great start on your work, Steve, so keep it going! Feel free to send more chapters.

For other writers on Fiona's board, feel free to send me something if you'd like. I'd be happy to critique some of your work. There's also an open invitation to check out the online writing workshop: sff.onlinewritingworkshop.com. I'm there as well as a host of other good writers/critters.

Cheers,

Brad.

#3 - 19th Jul 2002 13:54:00

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Feel free, Lisa. bbeaulieu@access360.com

I travel about as a consultant, so it sometimes takes me a little while, but I'd be happy to.

Brad.

#4 - 19th Jul 2002 23:27:00

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Brad... I'm horribly tempted to send you some stuff... but only if you have the time.

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#5 - 20th Jul 2002 13:12:00

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Thanks. <img src=">

Will send it now... take your time.

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