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#1 - 7th Jul 2002 22:01:00

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Hi guys

Unlike Lisa I am a new writer.. (I hope Lisa is published soon)..I could do with some constructive feedback on my work..

Does anyone here wnat to criticise a new fantasy writer?

Steve

#2 - 8th Jul 2002 14:24:00

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post a chapter or too.. im sure somebody will come up with some constructive criticism


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#3 - 8th Jul 2002 17:13:00

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Steve

If you're willing to let others see your work then you're a braver man than I Gunga Din.

But I'd love to have a look at what you've done and give you my humble opinion.

#4 - 8th Jul 2002 17:47:00

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I wouldn't mind reading it... though what I could offer, I don't know. They say criticing other peoples work is good for your own writting... so I should probably have a bash at it.

Gosh, that doesn't sound at all inspiring does it...

I would enjoy reading your stuff, Steve. <img src=">

You write, Big Hills?? Or have you said that before and I've just forgotten?

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#5 - 10th Jul 2002 16:47:00

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Lisa

Yes I write, although not anywhere near as much as I would wish - so there is a lot more in my head at the moment than there is down on paper.

And the dream of writing "the book" won't go away so I know that one day I will.

#6 - 11th Jul 2002 19:41:00

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Big Hills

Thanks for the email... I appreciate your comments. They are all valid and will be useful to me.

They are similar to the comments from Lisa and Snowy... so you guys certainly know your writing.

Cheers
Steve

#7 - 12th Jul 2002 19:01:00

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Steve,

If you're looking for some critting, I can highly recommend 2 sites. The first is the Online Writing Workshop. Their URL is:

sff.onlinewritingworkshop.com/

I use them and there's some great critters on there. You can also crit many other types of work and raise your own editing skills. Very useful for your writing. This site is not free however.

The second site, Critters, is at:

critters.critique.org/critters/

They are free and the crits are of high quality. However, I would say that, for me, it takes too long to get crits through the system. Depends on your needs as a writer.

Hope this helps,

Brad.

#8 - 12th Jul 2002 19:43:00

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BB

I wasn't really looking for a critique.. I just wnated this special few people to share my writing... I felt so comfortable and welcome in the Heartwood... that I felt like sharing.

I know some of my own faults and know what should be done... it's much harder to do it.

But maye one day will send something to critters etc.

Thanks for the information... you obviously know your stuff.

Cheers
Steve